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NairaV · 2012-02-24T18:48:59+01:00

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NairaVMember24 February 2012 16:48:59

Hi everibody!! I need your help. I just started working for one fashion inform agency , translating fashion news from Russian into English. I want you to give your assessment. Please tell me whether you understand what I am writing in English? and my English is bad? And the English-speaking people will not be to understand the text? Please, it's very important to me. Thanks

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The collection (spring - summer 2012) of the Italian fashion brand Frankie Morello was presented at MBFWR
Today the Italian fashion brand Frankie Morello has presented his collection of 芦Souvenir d 'Italie禄 Spring - Summer 2012 on the podium at Mercedes-Benz Fashion Week Russia.
"As a basis for the new spring-summer collection 聯Souvenir d 'Italie聰 of the bright and provocative brand Frankie Morello the homonymous film was taken" -as stated in the press release to the presentation. "This is the story of three girls, three different lifestyles united by the spirit of adventure and doing attempts to understand the world.
Fluffy skirt-bottoms, cycle latex shorts, ankle length pants and tops under the bust, all it resembling an American style.
Short cycle pants, peeping out from under the skirts, the half-open front, albeit with a look of irony, but the elegance and refinement recalling the days when the Italians were traveling on motorcycles and cognizing the "sweet life".
Symbols of Italian cities --pins, scarves and prints reached the extreme level, becoming souvenirs which could be worn around .
Clothing has become an ironic postcard in memory of the 50th the Apennines, dedicated to vivid life, the ongoing search forthe ideal city of Babylon today, "- the press release statement.
We should mention that Russian Fashion Week has been held in Moscow for the past ten years (since 2011 - Mercedes-Benz Fashion Week Russia) , twice a year - in early April and mid October.
The last three years RFW has been taken place in the Congress Hall of the World Trade Center. The first Fashion Week under the banner of Mercedes-Benz took place in Moscow from March 31 to April 5.

thank you very much for your assessment!!It is my first steps at this field? I never did any translations or read any fashion news on English before, do you realy think the text is simple English-speaking people to understand?? thenk you once more